Mark Trainer

 
Daddy Cloud! 10/15/2009
 
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Let's just agree that Wordle is a lot of fun.  This is the word cloud from my story collection.  When I pasted in the full manuscript, character names were among the biggest words.  That's probably not unusual, but I think my narrators and characters do use proper names a lot.  I then excluded character names. What else can I learn from this?  "Like," "looked," and "back" are in there a lot.  Do I use enough similes to have "like" loom so large? "Little," "just," "room"--can't draw any connections there.  Clearly "time" is much on my mind.  Maybe the biggest takeaway is that, to judge by my word cloud, I write with the vocabulary of a second-grader.

 


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Ted Corcoran

Fri, 16 Oct 2009 04:46:25

Your cloud is a mason jar, laying on its side, DAD a drop of honey on the lip, perhaps about to fall... perhaps not.

 

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